Saturday, April 6, 2013

Springfield: Vt.’s seventh circle

This is Springfield, Vermont, a body of people off I-91, a place somewhere between life and death – but no one’s taking its pulse.

http://www.basementmedicine.org/life-in-orbit/2013/03/28/springfield-vt-s-seventh-circle/
Tom Benton just might be the most talented young writer ever to grow up in Springfield, Vermont. His father was a machinist here, his mother an engineer, and his aunt is former Springfield Select Board member Terri Benton. In high school, his writings appeared in the Greenhorn school paper for which he won two medals in a nationwide high school journalism competition. Tom is currently a student at Johnson State College where he is Editor-in-Chief of the college newspaper, "Basement Medicine". More articles by Tom may be found here: basementmedicine.org/tom-benton/

25 comments :

  1. I didnt realize the town was this close to being taken over by gangs.

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  2. Wow- Another "smart" Vermonter. Apparently hasn't realized that although his story was great writing for maybe a class project, it really is not in any way appropriate to publicize if anyone with any kind of brain, business sense, or just common sense would like to contribute to a town revitalizing itself. That would also include the blog administrator. I think you shot Springfield in the foot spreading/publishing that story around.

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  3. Yes, a great english class project. A very poor history class project. 1960s??? I'm pretty sure Fellows closed the same day Bryant closed, 2002. Oh, Bryant???? Yeah, that other huge building on Clinton Street. Last to the party of the big three, but the one that closed with a $23 million backlog. Dragged to it's death by the dead weight of its sister companies. Sad story indeed. A better english/history project would be an explanation of how it all happend....

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  4. Amelia Earhart4/7/13, 8:08 AM

    If he can maintain the pace, imagery and intensity of the first paragraphs, Benton follows the stylistic trail blazed by Hunter S. Thompson and widened by Matt Taibbi. Too bad that Springfield was the topic and that his grip of history is weak. Taibbi is the best of the three in accuracy, but Benton avoids Thompson's gonzo editorializing (in my personal opinion, a pity).

    If we take Springfield as it is, warts and all, we can work to cure its basic problems. If we hide, deny or ignore them, we aren't going to overcome them.

    We have to take the same approach to the external factors underlying those problems-- as 7:13 hints, we need to understand not only how the companies' departure hurt the town, but how they wound up leaving. And if we find that the cause was entities so powerful as to be beyond our control, we need to face the fact that we must devise ways to control them or forever be the new peasantry.

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    1. Great story but one things constant HE DID STOP drove by 3 Times waiting for someone else. Atleast the person who wrote on there door is doing what they can no matter how small

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    2. Chuck,always telling us what we NEED

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  5. What a tool. Must be a lib.

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    1. Just helping an admin out4/7/13, 11:18 AM

      10:25, please remember....to respond to a comment with name calling isn’t disagreeing in a conversation, it’s showing a lack of class. Disagreement is fine, but do be respectful. Get your point across without being insulting or using profanity. Creative, intelligent people know how to rebut without being disrespectful.

      Come one 10:25, what crawled up your butt on this Sunday morning? Take a look in the mirror, do you like what you see? Did that post make you feel better about yourself? Do you have anything constructive to add to the conversation?

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    2. I am 10:25 and you are just anuther lib 11:18. I do like what i see in the miroor, so what if I am missing a few teef. It duz make me feel gud to make fun of uther people, see i is not so smat so the best i can do is to call the auther a lib. I am not realy sure waht lib means but it mst be bad since i see people on this cite use it alot.

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    3. No I'm 10:25!

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    4. NO!!, I AM 10:25!!!!!!!

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    5. Will the real 10:25, PLEASE stand up?

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    6. Anuther?

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  6. Could someone find the police report related to this body?

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  7. I think the body is just a metaphor.

    The whole piece is metaphor/creative writing- weak on facts, strong on defeatist drama. The kind of thing college freshmen write to gain philosophic "street" cred.

    Nothing the whole world needs access to, at least with our specific town attached to it.

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    1. I agree, when I read it I thought of the body as a metaphor for the town of Springfield. I enjoyed the piece very much and thought the author had some very valuable insight.

      Perhaps Mr. Benton could engage us on this blog with his line of thinking?

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  8. Mr. Benton here. I don't know how this wound up on the blog, but it was published for a small community as an exercise. I was trying to convey the mood of the town, as I've seen it. And that's it. The body's a metaphor.

    Anonymous 12:21, I'm sorry it seems defeatist: it wasn't intended that way. That's why I made -- maybe limply -- the point about the body being alive at the end. There's nothing wrong with Springfield the town: it's just in such a weird situation! I love the town, and I'm fascinated by this murky phase it's going through, so I tried to express that to this tiny community in the Northeast Kingdom backwoods.

    How it wound up here, I don't know. I'm going to write something worth showing to the town someday, but this isn't it and it was never supposed to be. At least I got some feedback. A lot of feedback. Holy heck, a lot of feedback.

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    1. Tom, great story. The administrator of this blog poaches anything related to Springfield out on the web and re-posts it here in the hope it drives traffic and comments and page views in return for advertising dollars. Check out the items advertised on the right side of this page.

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    2. Tom, it was good! May your reading public be wider than you ever expect.

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    3. Mr. Benton, In order to write one must learn how to read. More importantly, one must learn to read poetry and prose that is worthy of reading. Stacking a metaphor on top of and analogy stacked on top of another metaphor ad infinitum does not achieve the designation of 'worthy reading'.

      Sorry.

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    4. Mr. Benton,

      All your writing deserves a wider audience, even the ones only appropriate for "mature" readers. This is a spiritual, intellectual and abstract picture of Springfield, VT, painted adeptly with language and color and feeling. I enjoyed your story immensely.

      Your story is a sad description of where the town is at this place in time, but it was figuratively truthful. And there is hope for something more, just as we have seen hope in many young people in our town like, Ethan McNaughton. Young families are still buying houses, showing they plan to stay. Springfield can still be alive if we breathe some life into that limp body, and encourage people who have already become young masters of Springfield CPR to continue their optimism and hard work.

      We hope people like yourself come back to this town upon graduating, to raise a family and add to the positive population that will hopefully become more prevalent than the violent, drug abusing, welfare dependent majority, who most certainly began to appear when we became a prison town. They continue to procreate and flood our schools with their poor, abused, and neglected children who change the dynamic of our schools, and make some parents choose homeschooling or private school over the public system right now, because their is no room for gifted and enrichment programs.

      "Barbed Bard" might have chosen then name Trinculo instead? That would be more fitting. Thank you, Admin, for digging this story up and sharing it with us.

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    5. chuck gregory4/15/13, 8:49 PM

      Thank you, 1:42!

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  9. This blog has always been strictly non-commercial. We have never profited from any advertising. The cost of maintaining this blog is next to nothing so an income is not essential. Most local businesses would probably hesitate to advertise here due to our controversial open free speech policy. We'd rather have them help to keep the home town newspaper going anyways. We could have ads from online shopping sites but it wouldn't feel right, encouraging Springfield consumers to spend their dollars elsewhere.

    What appears to be paid ads in the right hand column is usually just a link to a non-Springfield news story we feel should be getting more attention, or some interesting and useful information or a video worth sharing. Any real ads are mainly offering something free to readers and space for them is donated at no cost and without any commission deal.

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    1. paranoid anonymous4/15/13, 8:51 PM

      "The cost of maintaining this blog is next to nothing"?

      Sounds like socialism to me!

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  10. Tom,
    You are superb as always. The blog people don't even know about all the accolades you've received from state and national venues. As an aside, "the Blues" (a freshman gang in town)have painted graffiti on a sign in front of my house, perhaps marking us in some way as suspect...What could I do? I went out and bought some paint to graffiti over the graffiti...

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